Written by Simone Braverman
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The graph below shows annual water usage (in millions of cubic meters) by industries in Somecountry. Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown.
You should write at least 150 words.
The graph below shows annual water usage (in millions of cubic meters) by industries in Somecountry. Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown.
You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar graph describes the water usage for every year in Somecountry in millions of cubic meters.
The Water(This sentence belongs in the first paragraph usage)is shown in two sources of water ,ground water and public supply. Fuel and textiles are the ones that uses the least water, 10 of public supply and 70 and 80 cubic millions , of ground water. Machinery is just the opposite of these two and consumes 10 of ground water and 100 of public supply.
Food/drinks, metal, paper and chemicals all use over 100 of ground water where chemicals peaks at dramaticlly high level of 430. The highest number of water usage of public supplies also belongs to chemicals (240). Next on the list is food/drinks with 190, the others are under 100.
Overall, the chemical industry uses a lot more water then the rest of the industries both ground water and public supplies, and in general most industries use ground water by far more then public supplies.
Its Closess to Band 7
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3 comments:
Dear Atul,
Thanks for your marvelous job. Though I don't want to let you down, you got to improve your English a lot as you have made lots of mistakes in your sample write ups.
Regards,
John Libra
Yes Dear,
I know that , actually when I review my example I saw some of mistake inside. But you know one thing, its just a sample and Its a way of writting.Simply its just a guide so that other students can get the idea. I think none of students copied my example to their exam.Its just a guide. However thanks for your comments. I will keep it ur advise on my head.
Best Regards
Atul
Thank you for your post and this blog. You do a great job! I think it's quite useful for intermediate and advanced students, like me for example. It seems that your "favorite" mistake is misspelling "writting" instead of "writing" (see your comment above). Anyway, thanks a lot. Be attentive and good luck. Did you sit for IELTS? If yes how much times and what score did you get?
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