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Sunday, August 24, 2008

Writing Task-2 Example-10

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Advertising is all around us, it is an unavoidable part of everyone's life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is negative. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.You should write at least 250 words.


Many people wonder about advertisements. Some people think that it has negative impact in our life. However, Other it has a positive effect in this world. This is not an easy essay to be answered, but I will look at this issue.
Advertisement has been playing a negative effect in our life.Of Course for several reasons: firstly, it motivates the psychological point in every body especially women. They will run to buy this advertised product especially if it’s from cosmetic industry, just to show their beauty to men, which will leads to more offenders and rapeing cases. Secondly, you can sit comfortably with your family and suddenly the telephone is ringing, nothing important, rather than one of the companies try to convince you to buy one of their products. It is a real example of intrusive advertisement. Lastly, sometimes you do not have the financial ability to buy something, but with these new methods of advertisement, you might run to buy it, which could affect your budget.


On the other hand, there are some good things. Such as, it compares the prices of the most of companies which benefits the consumer. Beside, it really gives us a chance to see more products which we would not know about unless TV and Radio show these things. In addition, it cut down our daily routine to see new faces and know more language with daily update for their method of advertising.


In conclusion, as we can see there are many aspects to this argument. I feel that there is no benefit at all from advertisement, it plays with peoples minds to make them buy more thing that they do not need it at all.
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